Dear Miss,
Taking this ENGLCOM course is really fun. Although there were boring lessons; after all, it was still an effective tool for enhancing my skills in writing. The S14B will not be complete without Miss Cequena. Miss has already been a part of our class. If Miss were not there, I guess, we are still nothing but a novice. Your good knowledge has helped us in our learning. Thanks so much!
The Tuesdays and Fridays really challenged me. I had experienced of writing for school paper, but this course, gave me more understanding and tips for writing a masterpiece. It also enhanced and improved my vocabulary and communication skills as a writer. By writing my essays, I had practiced DLR. Hoping that I can touch hearts by my essays (Service- Driven Citizen). ;)
I can say that the entry of cause and effect of mine has really engaged my learning to DLR. First of all, I had deep and creative ideas to express my feelings and thoughts regarding the topic. Organizing my ideas and thinking creatively honed me to construct my essay effectively. I also enjoyed writing it because it's all nothing but about my happiness. It was me who experienced the enjoyable and exciting Disneyland. I was writing myself, in short. However, I found it difficult to achieve touching hearts of other people. First, people are judgmental. Second, they only perceive obvious things. But then, I honed service-driven through editing and revising my block mate’s essay.
In the span of 13 weeks, Miss has given us tips to construct essays effectively by organizing our ideas through outlines. It will be easier to have my ideas blend with each paragraph. Also in years of writing, I realized that I must not write because I was told to, but to write for others. There are many styles in the world, but each has their own unique style. Thank You Miss for you had me discovered myself more.
Argumentative essay is the evidence of my acquired skill. First of all, I think my first draft was a mess. Second, the transitions were in mess. Third, there were not enough facts and data. I could not persuade and please people like that, right? And so I did my best in revising it like searching more evidences and paraphrasing more. By your teachings, I learned to address my essay to my audience, to organize my thoughts and interests. I also stated examples and action plan in regards to my topic - Mining. Thanks for your comments and telling me my point of improvement.
All I wish for is to touch hearts. I hope if someone reads my essay I could touch them, then I can finally say that I did. Like what you did Miss, your words reached my heart, so thank you so much! I really enjoyed ENGLCOM and I gained knowledge.
The Tuesdays and Fridays really challenged me. I had experienced of writing for school paper, but this course, gave me more understanding and tips for writing a masterpiece. It also enhanced and improved my vocabulary and communication skills as a writer. By writing my essays, I had practiced DLR. Hoping that I can touch hearts by my essays (Service- Driven Citizen). ;)
I can say that the entry of cause and effect of mine has really engaged my learning to DLR. First of all, I had deep and creative ideas to express my feelings and thoughts regarding the topic. Organizing my ideas and thinking creatively honed me to construct my essay effectively. I also enjoyed writing it because it's all nothing but about my happiness. It was me who experienced the enjoyable and exciting Disneyland. I was writing myself, in short. However, I found it difficult to achieve touching hearts of other people. First, people are judgmental. Second, they only perceive obvious things. But then, I honed service-driven through editing and revising my block mate’s essay.
In the span of 13 weeks, Miss has given us tips to construct essays effectively by organizing our ideas through outlines. It will be easier to have my ideas blend with each paragraph. Also in years of writing, I realized that I must not write because I was told to, but to write for others. There are many styles in the world, but each has their own unique style. Thank You Miss for you had me discovered myself more.
Argumentative essay is the evidence of my acquired skill. First of all, I think my first draft was a mess. Second, the transitions were in mess. Third, there were not enough facts and data. I could not persuade and please people like that, right? And so I did my best in revising it like searching more evidences and paraphrasing more. By your teachings, I learned to address my essay to my audience, to organize my thoughts and interests. I also stated examples and action plan in regards to my topic - Mining. Thanks for your comments and telling me my point of improvement.
All I wish for is to touch hearts. I hope if someone reads my essay I could touch them, then I can finally say that I did. Like what you did Miss, your words reached my heart, so thank you so much! I really enjoyed ENGLCOM and I gained knowledge.
Love,
Danaleene Singh. :)
Danaleene Singh. :)